C4K part 2 week 1
#1 Comment to Arthur
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Arthur drew a picture of himself wearing a big hat and he
made a video talking about his fun weekend at the beach.
My comment to Arthur: "You look really great in your
hat. You did a good job on your video and it was great to hear that you had a
fun weekend. It is very smart to wear a hat to the beach so you don't get too
hot or get a sunburn. I live very close to the Gulf of Mexico and I love to go
to the beach. Do you make sand castles? My daughter and I love to dig deep
holes in the sand and let them fill up with water so we can sit in them. That
helps to keep us cool."
#2 Comment to Hazel
Hazel drew a picture of herself and Harold the giraffe. She
made a video telling about how she was trying to exercise, eat healthy, and
drink water. I told her that giraffes were my favorite animal and that we go to
see them in zoos. I also told her that I do not drink enough water and then I asked
her if she liked drinking water.
#3 Comment to Bittner
Bitner made a video about going to his Nana’s house. He said
he fell asleep in a big chair. The video was only 10 seconds long.
Hi Bitner, my name is Allison and I go to school at the
University of South Alabama in the United States. think that you did a great
job on your video and your drawing. I hope that you had fun making it. I
remember loving to curl up in big chairs when I was little. What other things
do you like to do at your Nana's?
C4K part 2 week 2
#1 Chloe
Chloe is a year 8 student at Pt England School in Aukland, NZ. Chloe’s post was about going to the local college nearby to play sports every Friday. She talked about several games that they played. She tries hard to be really descriptive but I could only really understand the details about one of the games, the other two were not explained very clearly even though she did give a lot of details.
Chloe is a year 8 student at Pt England School in Aukland, NZ. Chloe’s post was about going to the local college nearby to play sports every Friday. She talked about several games that they played. She tries hard to be really descriptive but I could only really understand the details about one of the games, the other two were not explained very clearly even though she did give a lot of details.
My reply: "Hi Chloe, my name is Allison and I am a student at
the University of South Alabama in the USA. I loved reading your report about
going to the college to play sports. I would have loved to have gotten to do
that when I was your age. Playing sports has always been one of my favorite
things to do. I think that the chain chiggy game sounds fun but it seems like
it could even be a little scary if the chain got really long. I think I would
want to be at the front. You must be really fast to have not gotten tagged.
Good for you! Keep up the good writing it was very descriptive and interesting."
#2 Losell
Losell is in Mrs. Lavakula 4th and 5th grade class
at the Pt England School in New Zealand. She and her class have been taking
swimming lessons at the local aquatic center for the last two weeks. These
lessons are very important to the students because several people in their
community have drowned because they did not know how to swim. Her group has
been learning to do the freestyle stroke. She seems to really injoy it but she
says that sometimes it makes her really tired.
My comment to Loseli: "Hi, Loseli, my name is Allison and I am a student in EDM510
at the University of South Alabama in the USA. I am studying to be a teacher
and I have been learning to blog this semester. I really enjoyed reading your
post about swimming lessons. I think it wonderful that you get to take lessons
with your class at school. That must be a lot of fun. I know that swimming
always makes me very hungry and I want to eat right after I am done. Does
swimming make you hungry? I was really scared of the water when I was little
and my parents had to force me to take lessons and it was really scary. I think
it would have been much better if I had all of my friends around for support.
Have you ever been afraid to do the things that your instructor tells you to
do? Do you and your friends help each other if you get scared or are having a
hard time learning to do something? I finally learned to swim and I am so glad
that I did but I still prefer to just float around on my back. Thanks for
sharing your experience with me and keep up the good work!"
#3 Rebekah
#3 Rebekah
Rebekah is in Mrs Nua and Mr Barks 7th and 8th
year class. She has been blogging since year 4. In her post she made a power
point teaching someone to multiply a number with a decimal by a one digit
number. Her instructions were very clear and easy to follow.
My comment to Rebecca: "Hi,
Rebekah, my name is Allison and I am a student in EDM510 at the University of
South Alabama in the USA. I am studying to be a teacher and I have been
learning to blog this semester. I really enjoyed your presentation. You did a
very good job teaching your audience how to multiply a number that has a
decimal. Your problem was presented in very clear steps that were easy to
follow. That is very important when you are trying to teach someone how to do
math. Have you ever thought about becoming a teacher? I think that you could be
a really good teacher if you like doing stuff like this. Keep up the great
work!"
C4K PART 2 Week 3
#1
Kaitlynne
Kaitlynne
is a 6th year student at the Pt England School in New Zealand. She
has been blogging since year four. In her post she created a grid map to get
from Hansel and Gretal’s house to the candy cottage. She included many
different types of terrain, a key and a cardinal direction on her map to
illustrate what her class has been learning in geography.
I told Kaitlynne that I really enjoyed
following her map to the Candy Cottage. It was a lot of fun reading and
following her directions. I can tell that she learned a lot in school about
geography and cardinal directions. I told her that it is very helpful to be
able to give these kinds of directions when you are trying to help someone get
to a certain location. I asked if she had ever tried to tell someone how to get
to her house be telling them to turn North, South, East or West? If not, that
might be a fun thing to try next time. Keep up all of the great work!
#2 Marilyn
Marilynn
is a 6th year student at the Pt England School in New Zealand. She
has been blogging since year four. Her post was a short book review on a book
titled “Mr. Stink”. At the time of her review she had only read 1 and ½ paged
but she really liked what she read and rated the book a 10 out of 10.
My
comment to Marilyn was: “Hi Marilyn, my name is Allison and I am a student in
EDM510 at the University of South Alabama in the USA. I am studying to be a
teacher and I have been learning to blog this semester. When I read the title of your book, “Mr.
Stink”, I thought it sounded very interesting and I thought that I might like
to read it too. I would love to hear more about it when you are finished
reading the whole story. What is your favorite book that you have ever read?
When I was your age, mine was “Misty of Chincoteague”. This book is about two
kids who raise money digging clams so that they can buy a wild pony that has
been captured in the pony roundup. My nest favorite would have to be
Charlotte’s Web. Have you ever read either of these books? If you have not, I
highly recommend them. Enjoy your reading and keep sharing your stories with
the world!”
#3
Damien
Damian
is a 6th year student at the Pi England School in New Zealand. His
post was a descriptive story about two friends trip to the beach.
My
comment to Damian was: “Hello Damien, my name is Allison and I am a student in
EDM510 at the University of South Alabama in the USA. I am studying to be a teacher
and I have been learning to blog this semester. I enjoyed reading your story
about the beach. You gave a lot of good details and I could really picture that
I was there with Miguel and Katy. I have heard that the beaches near to where
you live are very pretty. I live in the Southern United States and we go to the
beaches on the Gulf of Mexico. I love to swim in the salt water but we have a
lot of jelly fish. It hurts really badly when they sting and I always get out
of the water when I see one. Have you ever been stung by a jelly fish? I hope
you will keep writing these descriptive stories on your blog. Keep up the great
work.”
Hi Allison. Im a first year beginning teacher at Pt England School. Thanks for commenting on some of my students blogs, its really exciting for them to get comments from people around the other side of the world. Im really impressed with your blog, my own blog is quite lacking in comparison. Best of luck with your studies.
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